Hey guys. Its been what…three weeks since I last posted anything. Sorry about that, I’ve been really busy with homework and GCSEs.

But anyway, I’ve started to write a story set in the future about this girl who lives in a ‘perfect’ world. Here is the blurb:

Flawless: without any imperfections or defects; perfect.
To be flawless, you must smile all the time- never let them see you cry
To be flawless, you must look and act perfect. Out-of-home sports are forbidden – you cannot be seen sweating
To be flawless, you must have good grades and a happy friendship
To be flawless, you talk only when spoken to, especially with your parents, or betrothed
To be flawless, you cannot lie

Jay Walker is what they call ‘flawless.’ She’s beautiful, smart, thin and a perfect liar. They don’t know the last one, otherwise she wouldn’t be a perfect liar. For Jay has a secret that she and her family will carry to the grave, no matter what, if it means they stay alive.


What do you think? Here is the link to the story: https://www.wattpad.com/story/163101785-flawless

Please read it.




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